Tuesday, December 25, 2007

" suggest me a title for this.. plzzz"



I am glad i don’t remember and so do u

The days when i was the size of a speck of dust

Or probably that of a drop of a dew.


A small pouch of seven by five metres, I was put into,

Where I was helpless and knew nothing to do.



Ah! I am glad I don’t remember! The place around me,

Was filled with blood and blood,

And there was nothing I could see.


In that darkness I grew,

From the size of the tip of a needle, to that of a cherry,

And then to the shape of a little base ball,

All this, with not much of merry.


I then started developing into a baby like thing!

With small hands, tiny legs, like wings!



I started getting food through a small pipe

Somewhere on the top of this bag,

Not any other,

From may be a good kitchen,

Whom people call mother.


I could eat, I could drink, I could even breathe,

All what my mother sent into me,

I could very well feel.


I am happy I don’t remember the feeling I had,

May be to get out of this clumsy bloody place,

Yes, I was sad.


I wanted to look out, come out, into a so called beautiful world,

But I was tied to my mum, I was helpless,

So I kicked with anger coz I dint always want to be curled.


I jumped, I pushed, I kicked, I cried,

But all that I got in return was Nothing,

Though I tried.


My mum told me “Baby you’ve gotto be patient and calm,

Coz u need to get ears, nose n eyes,

Not only arms”


For almost less than three century days,

I had to wait n wait,

Until I landed into this world,

Where life was just a game of fate!


As soon as I stepped into this world,

I cried n cried,

Coz I knew I came into a darker place,

N people had, to me, jus lied.


Life in this world in definitely not like in the womb,

And there is no such darkness again,

Unless u r in the tomb.


Though I am glad I don’t remember all this,

I am sad…

Coz she remembers everything she has done to bring up this lad.


6 comments:

aarti sp said...

UR'NT SPECIAL SWEETY..U R SIMPLY ULTIMATE!! I LOVED THE BLOG..KEEP IT UP!!

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shloka said...

hey aarti....thanks soo much for ur comment...

shloka said...

u r the first person to read this

Unknown said...

did u write this..????? i dont think so coz a person like u...a happy go loving person cannot write this...it requires a matured brain....i seriously dont think u wrote it ... did any1 help u?????
Be candid 2 me

sunnysantosh said...

too good...keep rocking....u r very talented!!